Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Friends are important part of life. It is challenging to maintain friendship for long period of time, but it is a really good experience in life. It gives pleasure to mind. Personally, I feel that it is good to maintain friendship with best friends for longer time. I believe this way because of few reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if people maintain friendship with few friends, then it gives more happiness. Small number of friends can understand them well, so it is easy to cooperate to each other.They are familiar with each other so they can share their life events with each other. It is easy to know about small number of friends rather than to meet new friends.It is helpful for people to get help to come over from their hard time. Friends know weakness and strength of them due to have passed lot of time with each other. This will help them to live a happy life with having fun with friends.
Secondly, the close friends are useful during vacation tour. If friends are known to each other for longer time then, it is easy for them too comfortable to each other on outdoor trip or during other activities. For instance, Group of people going on trip, and there is a small number of group who are close to each other. Therefore friendship is helpful to enjoy the trip. They do not need to waste their time to know each other. They already know each other's likes and dislikes, so they can easily book their restaurant and place to live. Additionally, they are comfortable to each other so it is easy for them to have a great trip.
However, to make new friends is a good . Because people make new friends from their colleagues or from other places.This is how they know about them and learn new things from them. It is also exciting to get information about them. This is how one can get best experience from that.
In conclusion, To make few friends for long time is give pleasure to mind and helpful in our whole life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54469273743 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34925150365 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438547486034 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2615673025 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9545454545 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261292277792 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896984772962 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689639998358 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161619086741 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733096641892 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.