Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?"The best way to learn is by following the examples set by others."

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

"The best way to learn is by following the examples set by others."

Although some people disagree with the statement that the best way to learn is by following the examples set by others I agree that for the reasons as follow.

First of all, nothing is more important than the experience. Getting best result is required many experience. Therefore, people have two choices which are whether person’s self has to experience or person has to transfer experience from other person. The second choice is better because it is ready to use. For example, while I prepare an exam I ask my friends, who take same exam, to methods for taking high score. Their advices helps me to get good result.

Second of all, learning by following the examples set by others doesn’t surprise because it has been experienced for many times. It is true information. People have dreams and while they realize their dreams they face many ways. Examples are very good directors for showing people which way is better and they have certain results. For instance, my friend Mahmut’s dream was to be rich in short time. However, it’s not possible. There was only one way that is smuggling. He worked illegal job and he was jailed. He chose bad way and he faced bad result.

Third of all, the main advantages of following examples are time and money saving. Everything has substitute but time don’t have. So, time is the most valuable in human life. Nobody wants to waste time. Money also has same value for human life. The examples are the result of many experiences therefore they have reached optimum point for saving of money and time. For example, last days I decided to buy a phone I asked my friends who uses same brand phone. They explained features of phone. This rescued me from spending much time on researching.

In conclusion, therefore, I agree with the statement that the best way to learn is by following the examples set by others and I recommend people to transfer example than to practice by self. So that people may reach their goals with short way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
... by others I agree that for the reasons as follow. First of all, nothing is more import...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Getting the best'.
Suggestion: Getting the best
... is more important than the experience. Getting best result is required many experience. The...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...rience. Getting best result is required many experience. Therefore, people have two choices whi...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nsfer example than to practice by self. So that people may reach their goals with short...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81449275362 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51079417249 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.386798293 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5185185185 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204649667547 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536179814391 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114486185644 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192255987032 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183515872297 0.0645574589148 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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