Celebrities play a pivotal role in the young people’s community. Some people believe that famous entertainers and athletes are more significant and important to younger people than older ones. However, others disagree. In my opinion celebrities play crucial role in youths’ life. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, teenagers often spend most of their leisure time to watching shows and performance of their interesting players and artists. According to the Time journal almost all of youngsters spend their spare time on watching programs about their favorite entertainments and sports. For example, I am a university student and I have always concentrated on reading magazines and watching television about my desirable celebrities, moreover, during my school time my friend and I were following our celebrities’ lifestyles on social media such as YouTube, Facebook or Instagram. These circumstances have given me a chance to enjoy my leisure time and become aware of my interesting famous artists’ news. This example clearly shows that juveniles are more involved with social media to follow celebrities than adults.
Furthermore, grownups are much busy and have not enough spare time to track well-known people. Most of them are working for long times every day. Thus, they should devote their free time to their family. For instance, my father has been working eight hours a day. He becomes really tired when he arrives home. Therefore, he has preferred to pass his evening time with us in a restaurant or cinema rather than catching up with his own hobbies. Such decision has helped him to feel more relaxed than spending on TV and watching celebrities program. This example clearly illustrates that breadwinners like my father may not have ample time like young people to follow superstars’ reports.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that youngsters value celebrities far more than seniors. For two reasons, first they are more involved with social media, second, adults have not enough time to follow popular people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to follow superstars' reports. In conclusion, I strongly agree that you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33033033033 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91107957538 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2546068015 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1944142912 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590586876129 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673513154806 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136650335043 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460963149306 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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