Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Education is the significant part of developments of a country. Development societies have advanced and practical plans to improve their education. Some of them concentrate on students who are going to the university, but there are variable decisions, which authorities make. Visiting historical and memoriable places is one of their programs. I, personally speaking, feel that taking some courses in the summer related their future major should be more efficient and beneficial. In what follows, the reasons to support my viewpoint and perspective are vindicated.
To begin with, if the students take courses, which can guide them what they're going to do in their future vocation, they can realize their own real feelings about the occupation. A person will be prosperous as long as he loves the job. They can give up their major even when they are attending the classes, and select the other major. To put it into a more vivid picture, before I started my official classes in the university, I've taken some courses somehow related to my major. Some of my classmates relinquished, and they didn't come to class any longer.
Furthermore, it can be helpful and influential for their future. they can give different and sometimes useful ideas, and vice versa they can take practical ideas, which can help them in their future vocation. In spite of taking class in the university, they can prepare the basic elements for their vocation. Back to my example, I decided to open a clinic because it causes make much more money, and I will be independent, and pursue the procedure, which I am fond of.
Finally, is crystal clear when individuals know what they are going to do in the future, they would get less stress and tention in that moment, and in summers they have more time to focus on the emergency circumstances they would encounter to. Although they might feel stress in the future, they can handle it in better way because they got acquinted to these kind of conditions in their in time courses.
In conclusion, taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, in my book it is the best method that the university hold some advanced courses before starting the official collage classes. I think in this way because of being aware of the real emotion about vocation, already having more ideas and feeling less stress in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69059975302 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9549935947 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.421052632 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697044318345 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232980996848 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248928081405 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428543636592 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137890492999 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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