Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been said that if you want to serve your country, start helping with their community works. Nowadays, many people see that young individuals should have time to support their community. As far as I am concerned, however, I believe that currently, young people do not have the time, money, effort to help their community.
Recently, people do not have the time for community work as compared with the past. In old days, only men were always responsible for finding a job and work to support their families. Although women were free of outdoor works, so they can help their community because they had time and were not busy with jobs. On the other hand, now, both men and women work and have jobs, and both of them do not have the time to support their community as well.
Today, supporting the family has become more difficult and one of the top priorities than supporting the community. Due to the increase in living expenses, many parents need to work extra time to earn extra money to support their kids. Parents needed at least a second job to cover for school tuitions for their children. In contrary, before the 2000s’, life was not as expensive as today. People used to support their kids with one job only and they did not have to work for an extra job. Therefore, the time that parent have would be spent on another job rather than on volunteering with the community work.
Some people might argue that with the development of technology such as smartphones, people should have time to support their communities. That is true to some point, yet, not every work can be done throw technology. For instance, people can not support to build community building through the phone, they need to do physical work instead. Indeed, community services need time, money and physical effort for sure.
In conclusion, I strongly think that people should do not have the capability of supporting their community. I think about in this way because community work requires time, money and effort, and people nowadays, do not have those requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46736333658 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477401129944 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6971090917 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0526315789 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261996362182 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100902002062 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648597289028 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182441702062 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602444270027 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.