Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether governments are responsible for the health care services for their citizens or not. Personally, I think the duty of all governments around the world is to provide perfect services for all citizens and improve the living outcomes. thus, they have to give suitable health care for all people in the country.
To begin with, most authorities used to take taxes from citizens. they deduct more than 30% of the salary that employees receive. Therefore, these people need to take some services in return. For example, in the United States, the government deduct almost thirty percent of citizen’s monthly salary in order to have some budget to offer the best services for people. thus, this enormous amount of money gives the people the right to ask the government for a perfect health care services in return.
Adding to the previous point, citizens are putting most of their effort to develop their countries. so, their basic right is to get some health care as a reward from the government. they do not have to struggle to look for clinical services whenever they have a health issue.
On top of that, the government has to give these clinical services to its citizens in order to increase their loyalty to the country. For instance, the government in Saudi Arabia provides free health services for all citizens. Hence, most Saudi people feel satisfied with all free health benefits from the government. they do not want to leave the country because of this unique advantage. thus, they become more loyal to the country. However, when people have difficulties getting some clinical benefits because the government does not provide them, people tend to become upset and sometimes create problems to the government such as protesting on the street and burning some public amenities. so, they become less loyal to the government.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments are responsible to provide health care services to all people.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The government should require all young adults to perform some kind of national service such as military service or social work Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 67
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is the responsibility of the government to provide health care to everyone living in that country.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12951807229 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5757415251 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460843373494 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1790621142 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6315789474 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0546739654837 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021407889225 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259095595397 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0331927630439 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190439091329 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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