Do you agree or disagree that honesty is essential while selecting a leader for student organization or club?

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Do you agree or disagree that honesty is essential while selecting a leader for student organization or club?

As said "honesty is best policy" everyone can trust on the honest person. Leader has to be honest personality which everyone can trust on him. So, for this reason I strongly agree with this topic.

Firstly, leader is the person who leads or handle all group. And group is made by the particular number of persons. In the group every person should trust on the leader. Otherwise if leader is dishonest then no group member could reliance on him. as a result the group will be uncontrollable although every person will do what they want to do. For instance one of the company leader was dishonest as nobody could believe on him as a result that company members got angry and they tried be misdirect the company and after some time period that company was collapsed.

Secondly, if leader is dishonest in company and in any political party so,their collaborators and people, they cannot faith on them. As an example, in government, before voting every political leader concedes many more things he will in his government as they are not honest people could not trust on them as result people got angry.

Thirdly, whole company is dependent on the high reputed leader on this position honest persons are only nominated and select on their capabilities as they can handle whole company. And for this position dishonest person selected then company would be destructed.

In the conclusion honest person with the required qualities of the leader can manage the group very well, who can handle every member with honestly. as people also can trust him.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
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... can handle every member with honestly. as people also can trust him.
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... can handle every member with honestly. as people also can trust him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as to, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92803030303 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51838681567 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.5806294589 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120089922593 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472229625686 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263215610301 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690820874137 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297364757125 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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