do you agree or disagree? improving school is the most important factor for successful development of a country.
Nowadays, a great number of factors contribute in growth and development a country. In recent years, a controversial debate has formed among people about determining the most important reason in the prosperity a society. Some believe that improving schools has a salient role in this way; however, others claim that other points can accelerate the progress. I am unanimous with the letter group. The next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through three noticeable reasons:
To begin with, the psychologists always contends that if people's soul is happy, their community will achieve the pack of success as soon as possible; hence, the first step is that governments should dedicate some their budget for art and entertainment section such as the best concert halls or cinemas, the most exciting funfairs and even local ceremonies. All of these can provide pleasure times for human beings. After a tedious week, such great entertainments can cause people relieve their stress; consequently, a fresh mind will assist workers to boost their performance in work places with making the least errors. In short, a society with joyful living beings can be more productive compared with a community with depressed people.
The second reason for my argument lies the fact that since today's the world confronts unemployment trouble, so no matter how a school is in high quality because students will not be able to find their favor careers in the future. For this, the states should support young investors by providing some loans or funds. Launching small businesses by highly motivated young people is one of the other crucial factors in creating development. One should not forget that young humans have the new and creative ideas; therefore, relying on them and their thoughts will cause youths to be encouraged in industrial section and global business.
Moreover, the rulers should assist young beings to travel foreign countries for learning new technological advances and international management courses. Furthermore, the youths can observe the best methods which have caused those countries to grow, then they would take note form their observation, record some videos and interview with the most successful companies. In return, all of these data would lead the country toward the prosperity.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that improving schools is a small part of progress in a country, other factors such as investing in making people happy and trusting and supporting small businesses can be more vital in this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, as for, in short, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70502970368 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612745098039 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2999349627 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149181262209 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482271350923 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454307591503 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855513065107 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391007656672 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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