Do you agree or disagree? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
In this complicated and progressive era in which we live, confronting different problems in various areas is inevitable. In this regard, while some people assert that being independent is important and we should rely on our knowledge to solve complications, others stand on the other side stating that asking other people for advice pushes us further. I believe that depending on our information is not the optimum approach to tackle challenges.
First and foremost, knowledge is limitless but our life is limited. Hence, due to lack of sufficient time, we cannot broaden our horizons in every major and topic. As a result, asking professionals for guidance could be a practical solution to solve individuals’ problems and save time. For example, I hesitated between continuing my study or finding a job, when I had finished my bachelor's degree. I asked different experienced people and then collected the pros and cons of each decision. It was essential for me to use people's advice because it could change my entire life.
More importantly, using other people's advice and experiences can reduce the rate of repetition, especially in the scientific area. We may use different routes to solve a scientific obstacle which just one of them is the right solution. In this area, using others’ studies can help us find a solution in a shorter time and also cost-effective way. For instance, scientists stand on the shoulder of previous scientists in order to use their experiences and improve our life. If they do the exact experiment which others have done, our knowledge never goes any further.
In the end, due to the aforementioned arguments explored in the previous paragraphs, I am of the opinion that using other people's advice is better to save our time. Moreover, it prohibits us to make blunders again which are made by others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93777073368 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9158195876 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313055562296 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921727399956 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732876475669 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185814542389 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371707105152 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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