Do you agree or disagree? It is easier to bring up a child now than it was 50 years earlier. Give reasons.
Upbringing of a child has always been a difficult task, be it now or be it in the past. But, when one compares the two time periods it is evident how difficult it is now to raise a child and hence I disagree that it is easier to bring up a child now as it was 50 years ago.
Earlier in those days, major part of the female sector especially married women had one specific role of being a housewife and their main job was to raise their child. In contrast, most of the women in today’s world are a part of the working sector and because of this they don’t get enough time to properly raise their child. And hence, to escape from these problems they hire nanny’s who can raise and take care of their child. For example, I remember my mother always taking care of all my needs, from feeding me food to making me stop crying, everything was very easy for her. In comparison to this, mothers of this era are facing a hard time in raising their child as it is very difficult for them to manage their work life and their children.
Also, because of the advancement in market and higher standard of living, nowadays, various materialistic things are available like fancy toys or clothes and therefore, parents for satisfying their kids spend a lot of money on buying these unnecessary things even if they were not in the state to afford it. But, back in the days of 50 years ago because of the absence of these materialistic, parents didn’t have to spend a lot of money.
To put it briefly, raising a child has never been as easy task and it will continue to be more challenging. But, compared to the present, the parents of past generation faced a lot less problems in upbringing their child.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211699164345 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.150417827298 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08356545961 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0557103064067 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.08356545961 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119777158774 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0362116991643 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50646654446 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362116991643 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00278551532033 0.00188951952338 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.08356545961 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00557103064067 0.0209618222197 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.008356545961 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1719.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 314.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47452229299 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267515923567 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184713375796 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12101910828 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0796178343949 0.112833075102 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50646654446 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.6777838406 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 28.5454545455 20.5533526081 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7695064229 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 120.699889404 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.5533526081 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.644075263715 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 47.0167921251 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.26923076923 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238043295128 0.300154397459 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161712152591 0.103427244359 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10156331232 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.659440108613 0.497263757937 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13711976204 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120778682824 0.114077575197 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12821490307 0.0781384742642 164% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303634366833 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631392167431 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199549294144 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161110386127 0.0618886996521 260% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.