Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
The weather phenomena is outstanding. How the various weathers at different time of the year blend into each other and occur one by one is worth experiencing. This, truly is an example of beauty of nature. And thus, I prefer to experience different kinds of weather and hence would like to live in areas where weather changes several times a year.
Change is the law of nature and it is inevitable. And one should experience change in life otherwise life becomes dull, boring and monotonous. Hence, the changes in climatic conditions helps in keeping our life interesting. For instance, no individual would like to experience summer throughout the year. Those sweaty afternoons are really unbearable and they make you feel uncomfortable. Neither do people like experiencing rains for a long time. As all the roads are blocked and amount of traffic is increased, this leads to wastage of time. Hence, there need to be a balance amongst them.
These varied seasons also mark the arrival of various festivities. And these festivities bring joy and happiness among everyone around the globe. For example, during winter, Christmas is celebrated where people meet and greet each other and share gifts. This also marks the beginning of a new year. In a country like India, which has vast traditions and cultures, every season is associated with a different festival. And thus, for experiencing all these traditions and festivities one needs to live in a place where the climate varies.
To put it briefly, it is good to experience and be a part of change as it will keep our lives more interesting and worth living. Apart from that, to be able to watch nature change its form is always pleasing to our mind and soul. And so I believe to live in a place where the weather changes several times a year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...be able to watch nature change its form is always pleasing to our mind and soul. And so I believe ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'hence', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236151603499 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.160349854227 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816326530612 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320699708455 0.046263068375 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0379008746356 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102040816327 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0262390670554 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68016481533 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349854227405 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102040816327 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0116618075802 0.0209618222197 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174927113703 0.0139019557991 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1803.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 308.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8538961039 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233766233766 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13961038961 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12012987013 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68016481533 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 59.1760875956 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8274706359 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 38.0432900433 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389835722154 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.076793368332 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0673768383901 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439353851856 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142807117301 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135032632154 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120910581051 0.0781384742642 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335577479398 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0606367126921 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274245250709 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042464550209 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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