do you agree or disagree it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize because modern life is very complex.
todays every thing change and become complex. everyone have many work to do during their times. According to given title it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize because modern life is very complex. In my opinion it is good belief and technically I agree with this attitude. In what follows I will present two important reasons to support my own opinion about the mentioned title.
First and important reason is that, with organizing and making plans everyone can do all their work even when they have a lot of work to do. In modern life young people are so busy and they have a lot of work to do, they should have full time work to earn money that they need for spending their life, they should spend times with they families and maybe they go to university and they should study. So if they do not make plane they can not do all of this work in a time. in this way the become more sucssesful in their future life.
The second reason is that, making plan and organization works, help people to have more organized brain and it helps to have less stress during our life. So for modern young people is important to make plane because when they make plane for their life they have less stress and they do their work more carful than others. forexample, I am student and I should study my university corses
In conclusion, I completely agree with the mentioned title which emphasizes that, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize because modern life is very complex. To support my own idea, I presented two important reasons and clarified all of them. To read first one, I stated that, young people in modern life can do all of their work by organization them. In second reason I presented that, they have less stress with making plan for their works and they can do them more carful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... every thing change and become complex. everyone have many work to do during their times...
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...ing change and become complex. everyone have many work to do during their times. Acc...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
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Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...go to university and they should study. So if they do not make plane they can not do ...
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... and I should study my university corses In conclusion, I completely agree with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50295857988 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21346070307 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396449704142 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8255779423 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382876972048 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163134931659 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173254181223 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3040290074 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100146165553 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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