Do you agree or disagree that people should learn foreign language in their country Or travel to country of targeted language
Nowadays, people choose to learn languages in a convenient way.The question is whether people should learn a language in their own territory or they should inhabit the country where they target languages.Personally, I think the best way to learn is to move down to the state of the language originator.My decision is based on the following reasons, which I will develop on my body paragraphs.To begin with, learning a foreign language in a targeted country prevents us from being lonely and isolated.More importantly, we can always express ourselves better and form deeper connections with the native speakers around us.Whereas, when we chose to learn in our own environment, we are more likely to be alone since it is a second language and as a result, we might feel depressed and sad.My sister's experience is a good illustration.My sister stayed in Germany for two years in order to learn deutsch and she was able to form deeper relationships with the people around.In fact, she never felt isolated since the people around her also communicate in deutsch.Eventually she was happy she made a lot of friends when she was there.In contrast, If she had chosen to learn deutsch in Nigeria, obviously she would be depressed because people around her wouldn't be able to speak the language and as a result, she would be sad.On top of that, when we learn a second language in the targeted country where the language is spoken, we are more likely to secure jobs with foreign companies.To explain broadly, these days a lot of companies prefer to employ people who can communicate with different languages.However, getting a job might be difficult if one chooses to learn a second language in one's territory because foreigners hardly set up businesses outside their comfort zones.Coming from my previous example, while my sister was learning deutsch, she was opportune to work with one of the biggest plastic companies in Germany.Although their customers were mixtures of Nigerian and German, she never had any issues because she could speak both languages effectively.On the other hand, if she had stayed in Nigeria to learn German, she wouldn't have been able to work with foreigners as most foreign people don't set up their businesses in Nigeria.In light of the reasons mentioned, I think the best way to learn a language is to move to a targeted country.This is because it makes it easier to speak the language fluently, and also increases one's chance of working with foreigners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, whereas, while, i think, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0072815534 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05809350026 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 412.0 20.1344086022 2046% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2063.0 100.406767564 2055% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 412.0 20.6045352989 2000% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 139.0 5.45110844103 2550% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299365650732 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.299365650732 0.076458572812 392% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299365650732 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 208.2 11.7677419355 1769% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -338.24 58.1214874552 -582% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 162.8 10.1575268817 1603% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.26 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.18 8.01818996416 339% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 166.8 10.0537634409 1659% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.247311828 556% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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