Do you agree or disagree with this sentence?workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
The question is whether workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long or not. In my perspective, this type of view to work is very logical because it can provide some benefits for workers at least it can help them to evade from lethargy. In my arguments and reasons are listed as below that will strengthen my point of view:
First of all, having different task can improve workers' performance. When workers do a variation of duties, spontaneously a missive of new experiences will add to employees. This will help them to broaden their knowledge base of work; hence workmen will be able to create creative ideas related with their tasks.
Second, companies and factories will obtain a lot of profits because of working employees in diversities sectors. When a worker works in different parts of a factory, he never confront with
a torpid or lethargy feeling, consequently a workman has a positive energy can raise up quality of his work and reduce his errors. Companies need to such workmen with high spirit because they will not be forced to spend a lot of money for treating of labors' depression.
Third, working in different sectors will boost workmen's interpersonal skills. Since they would meet various types of personality in several parts, subsequently they make new friends for themselves; therefore can share some of their entertainment with each other in out of the place of work.
As I have illustrated, working in different parts gives an opportunity to workers to gain worthwhile experiences. It not only helps them to have a healthy mind and soul, but also it can prepare them to adapt to harder tasks in society and different jobs.
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he never confront with
he will never confront with
he never confronts with
consequently a workman has a positive energy can raise up quality of his work
consequently a workman who has a positive energy can raise up quality of his work
Sentence: Second, companies and factories will obtain a lot of profits because of working employees in diversities sectors.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to diversities and sectors
flaws:
More compound or complex sentences/clauses wanted. Try not to use pronouns like 'you, I, they...' as the subject of a sentence. Look:
Since
they would meet various types of personality in several parts, subsequently
they make new friends for themselves;
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1418 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.758 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.65 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.748 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'confronts'.
Suggestion: confronts
... different parts of a factory, he never confront with a torpid or lethargy feeling, con...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'at least', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250773993808 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.145510835913 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.077399380805 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433436532508 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0743034055728 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142414860681 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0278637770898 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71971947353 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402476780186 0.0309702414327 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00188951952338 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650154798762 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0433436532508 0.0209618222197 207% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0123839009288 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1755.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88926174497 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328859060403 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275167785235 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151006711409 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114093959732 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71971947353 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 65.7925928849 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8333333333 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6641522171 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.644075263715 181% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.3501118568 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373666722597 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.086445119236 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0471536730061 0.0752933317313 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.610969177976 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142057659646 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154147935269 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193441764461 0.0781384742642 248% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.201850037652 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0668899202735 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19228970741 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13257245998 0.0618886996521 214% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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