Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Being creative, rather than planning carefully more often results in the best solution of a problem.
If I were asked which weapon I prefer to use to win a battle—shield or spear, I think I would lose using any weapon alone. It can be vividly compared to this topic. When finding solutions to a problem, a careful plan is like a strong shield protecting us from going into chaos, while creativity is like a sharp spear helping us solve problems efficiently. We need both of them.
To begin with, let’s look at the importance of being creative. On the one hand, being creative can help people think out of the box and find effective solutions. On the other hand, without ideas coming from creative...
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Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 432 350
No. of Characters: 1970 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.559 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.56 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.575 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.404 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.252 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.403 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
PS. this is not my own essay, it is a sample response I found on the Internet and I just wanted to how many points it would get. Thank you every much.