Do you agree or disagree with this statement? the best way to travel is in a group with a tour guide.
as people regard traveling as an essential part of their lives more and more, which how traveling, in group or individual, becomes a controversial topic among people. in this regard, some people hold the view that traveling in a group with a tour guide becomes more effective, while other people have the opposite view. as far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight because the tour guide has more experience than any passenger, and can solve the problems in our journey with technical advice.
first, tour guide can become more effective than traveling as a single part. as a role, a competent tour guide can equip his/her passengers with insightful view over different subjects and rewarding experience to overcoming difficulties in the numerous situations in the long journay. in addition, experienced tour guide resembles a map, you will steer clear the obstacle on the your traveling. for example, in the musume, if someone can not figure out the spesefic issue in there, because there are a number of cultures, various history, representative arts, etc, can ask either other members of the group or the tour guide.
second, discriminating choices of tour guide can make a lot of difference. how? some tourists would like to vist a specific palce, whereas others would like to go another place. here, tour guide has vital role. small example may give some light to this point, once I go to visit the Lut desert, where placed in the middle of Iran, I would like to visit desets at night, while other persisted to stay at home, finally, tour guide could help me to visit the night sky in desert.
However, some people may vote such a plane for visit or traveling by individual not as a gourp. as many tourists confess, and according to my experience, there are numerous difficulties and trouble some situations that tourists have to deal with. hence, tour guide not only being in positin to taking initiative, but also can make a best decision and devlope the plan. so, we can achieve our goal with a tour guide in the our journay.
in conclusion, taking all into account, traveling with tour guid as a group has alot advantages. expericence, abilities to cope with difficulties and so forth are small advantages when someone travelling with a rout guide as a groupe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91836734694 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66410573963 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2826002502 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.411764706 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243828275105 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874594052296 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569680451292 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154238028357 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659743852698 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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