the internet makes some problem or not
As people regard internet as an essential part of daily living more and more, How?, is good question, read news, checking inbox mail, etc are small example can given some light to this question. some people hold the view that internet, and some means related to internet, make our life different and provide some difficulties, while some have opposite view. As far as I am concerend, internet, and in general word internatioal communication, provides more information, awerness of new event in all over the world, and other stuff, I agree with the latter point, beacuse not only do provide more useful information for people, but also make community feel more informd.
the first reason which sould be stated here is that information, knowledge, news, and other items like these, are available in the internet. life in the fast lane today has turned out to have numerous difficulties and trobelsome situation that we have deal with. internet is the key to this problem. you may ask me How?, I illustrate some point, today student confess, it usually take long time to find proper resource about specific subject, again, many people would like to be aware of new thing and become up to date as to the current technology that help to improve activities of dayily living, there are more question can bring about, but I would like to say the important factor that can answer these requirment is internet.
another subtle point that deserves some world is that the qulality and quantity of the resource and facilities indicat the level of community and consequently the position of contury over the world. internet is one of the main and crucial facilities. therefore, if one countury wants to achieve better recognition in the world, it should consider this aspect and spend more money, which may be very expensive. Seoul, for exmaple, is the most telecommunicative city in the world just because of using the internet. I cannot oversee tha fact, internet, and other communication means, also have some negetive aspect such as illusion, violation and even brain malfunction. based on the finding in various reaserchs people who infect with long exposure to the internet's appliance will indeluge themselves in to world full illusionary love, violence and even pessimestic life. online games, for example, which its popularity are still growing, children are endanger to these problem. we as parents, close friends and even teachers must take care and keep our children track what they are doing or thinking. another small example is free access to evil and ugly website through the internet. finally, internet have different aspect, like access to the proper resources for students in collage or access to the unfriendly website and information, we must obligated ourselves to disentangle right from bad, accurate from unaccurate information through using the internet.
in conclusion, there are disadvantages of using the internet, which mention above, but there are more advantages of using the internet. although, these negetive effect can almost be negligible in comparison with great advantages, scientists believe that these negetive effect are not overrated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2665.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21526418787 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71382500954 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559686888454 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6763139183 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.263157895 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8947368421 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336162165598 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10403645429 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106874779377 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187337922191 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801725898468 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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