Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific examples and details.
Children encounters many problems and need some help to solve them. Although society believes teachers or friends will give the best solution, however I would say parents are the key role to the children. I want to give some detailed reason about it .
First, parents are more experienced person. When the person faced with some serious experience, they would need quick but helpful solution. At this occasion, parents can give reliable and realistic advice by using their own experience. They would also teach not only simple but polite manners to their children, which would be used later in the society life.
By giving some examples, my mom used to be one of the best career women in the bank, she told me about how the relationship in the society are working, the importance of the behaviors to me. She said that these sorts of experience that she already had would also appear to me later. To live a better social life later, I’m trying to remember her advice by using her happenings.
Second, parents care for their children than anyone else. There are some special emotions and feelings between parents and their children which can’t be found anywhere else. They would give warm-hearted advice, teach some necessary manners. For instance, supportive mother would support their children for their whole life, however, teachers can give some small amount of advice because of limited time. Rather than teachers or friends, parents can say some truthful but realistic advice. The more truthful and unkind sayings would make the children to have thoughts about themselves.
Lastly, parents have a good understanding of their children. By raising their children since the babies, they already know their good or bad habits, and would probably know their abilities and disabilities. They also know their children’s advantages and disadvantages. As an example, my parents always mention my bad habits which made me to fix the problems. Their knowledge about me gave some good advice which is helpful to acknowledge my disadvantages and offer some opportunity to improve myself.
In conclusion, parents are the best mentors for their children. This is because they will give some helpful advice by using their events, and because they take much care for their daughters and because they already have good understandings of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20734908136 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58226800628 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5947684656 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2608695652 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086152775696 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348917502157 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356259195826 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584931802492 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299341898882 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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