Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of friends over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Today, due to high expansion of technology and internet people are more alone rather than past, so having friends is drastically necessary in our life. Although, many people prefer to maintain their friendships instead of making new friends, I believe that it is really remarkable to be able make new friends.
First and foremost, the first reason that I strongly think we should be able to make new friends is that, that is completely possible we lose some relationships because of being busy, having a lot of assignments or being far away from our friends. Hence, the matter is that, ability to finding friends is dramatically important. For example, I remember when I was in university, I was far from my hometown. It caused I saw my high school friends rarely. Therefore I felt alone. Thus I decided to be familiar with my classmates to be able know them better and make new friends. Actually, friends are one of the most significant parts of our life, and if we cannot save our friendships, we should be able to make new ones.
Another equally reason that I believe making new friends is more important is that, facing a lot of people during our life is a brilliant chance to have numerous friends that we can rely them in our problems. I think, the advantages of making new friends is that we so many friends that we can enjoy from being with them. As a matter of fact, some of these friends have some professions that it would be useful in crucial situations. For instance, last year, I decided to travel with my friends to another country. Unfortunately, I had a bad headache. hat was so terrible that I could not do anything. Fortunately, one of friends was medical student, so he could cure me dramatically, and I felt better after hours.
In commence, although some people prefer to maintain their small relations, I believe it is more spectacular to be able make new friends. Due to, sometimes we are far from our previous friends, and we will lose them. In addition, making friends has a lot of benefits as it was mentioned above.
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- integrated writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ed I saw my high school friends rarely. Therefore I felt alone. Thus I decided to be fami...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...friends rarely. Therefore I felt alone. Thus I decided to be familiar with my classm...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hat
...y. Unfortunately, I had a bad headache. hat was so terrible that I could not do any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67679558011 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72678241299 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1607802741 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1052631579 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24160686788 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811924353079 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577472615719 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162568645927 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396076348771 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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