do you agree or disagree student should have a broad knowledge of subject rather than focus in one academic major?
Although, there is a growing consensus that having a broad knowledge of many academic subjects is better for the professional livelihood; However, there is a solid body of evidence that casts doubt on these beliefs. Form personal perspective, I believe that it is better to specialize in one specific subject given that it gives the chance to accumulate knowledge, target accomplishment, and achieve success in one career.
Firstly, provided that students want to accumulate knowledge, they should focus in one specific major; so, they can succeed with an excellence. A survey conducted by the university of Oxford found that students who studied one specific major could earn profound understanding and got high grade given that they cannot only gain experience but skillfulness too. Therefore, students who concentrate in one major subject could have good careers and better social status in the future.
Next, couple with accumulate knowledge, target accomplishment is another reason why it is better to focus in one academic subject. Provided that people want to earn a scientific honor or invent, they should focus on studying one subject to achieve it. For example, the Egyptian scientist Ahmad Zewail, he specialized in chemical and physical technology, and was awarded a Nobel Prize for his work in femtosecond; moreover, he became the first Egyptian who earned this price in the scientific field. Consequently, people who concentrate in one academic major can target accomplishment.
Finally, since the beginning of the last decade, the job market has become so competitive. To put it in another way, doing well in a job and moving forward is very important today than before. For example, the technological engineers in the Silicon Valley who specialized in on filed such as software or hardware can promote to better positions with high salaries. As a result, set a goal in one specific field is significant to achieve career success.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt specialize in one academic major has great benefits for the professional livelihood. It is suggested that schools design an educational program to help students to choose the careers they want to specialize in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...careers they want to specialize in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30878186969 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0143346988 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5117808041 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.933333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269738287775 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919972985504 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633636777832 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142213468263 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570663011326 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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