Do you agree or disagree When people succeed it is entirely because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with their success

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ling over how they were able to make it.I personally believe that success comes w...
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...success comes with tremendous hard work.I feel this way for two reasons, which i ...
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....I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs. ...
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...adually it becomes crowned with victory.My husband’s experience is an intelligent...
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...ecomes crowned with victory.My husband’s experience is an intelligent example of ...
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...ience is an intelligent example of this.While he was pursuing his PhD at the universi...
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... to fulfill the departmental requirement,which is about passing the preliminary examin...
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...out passing the preliminary examination.From his reviews, only 10 percent do pass.S...
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...reliminary examination.From his reviews, only 10 percent do pass.So this challeng...
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...m his reviews, only 10 percent do pass.So this challenged him and he started prep...
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...reparing from the beginning of the year.In Fact,he spent over twelve hours everyda...
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...g from the beginning of the year.In Fact,he spent over twelve hours everyday studyi...
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...ent over twelve hours everyday studying.At that time, majority of his friend are g...
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...majority of his friend are gallivanting.Infact, one even confronted him that know matt...
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...d him that know matter how much time he devote for the course he won’t pass.But my hus...
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... he devote for the course he won’t pass.But my husbands tenacity keeps him going an...
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...im going and eventually he was among the people that ace the exam.If he had liste...
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...was among the people that ace the exam.If he had listen to his classmates, he wo...
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...the people that ace the exam.If he had listen to his classmates, he wouldn’t have pa...
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...the people that ace the exam.If he had listen to his classmates, he wouldn’t have pa...
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...hat ace the exam.If he had listen to his classmates, he wouldn’t have passed. ...
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...with careful planning and determination.Some people attributed my husbands victory a...
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...ributed my husbands victory as luck, but I can tell you he planned a lot because ...
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... I can tell you he planned a lot because he had a daily time table, which include...
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...cluded hours to complete different task.In fact, he only slept for five hours whil...
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...t for five hours while he was preparing.All this actually made him to attain a grea...
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...ually made him to attain a greater feat.If he had not planned well he might not ha...
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...ually made him to attain a greater feat.If he had not planned well he might not ha...
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... had not planned well he might not have attain the victory. In light of the reasons...
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...uccess comes with a myriad of hard work.This is because it requires consistent hard ...
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...se it requires consistent hard work, and because it involves a lot of determinati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, i feel, in fact, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07986111111 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08830110002 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 275.114975965 48.9658058833 562% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.75 100.406767564 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.6045352989 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.75 5.45110844103 362% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151902068848 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122671889584 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645365184426 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122671889584 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645365184426 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.5 11.7677419355 327% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 58.1214874552 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 10.1575268817 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.01818996416 142% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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