Do you agree or disagree?
If people have that opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Career is one of the most important issue in people's lives who always look for decent jobs.There is a controversy as to whether people should take a job which is satisfying or secure. I believe that having the chance to get a secure job, people should take it immediately. there are two reasons that support my idea.
To begin with, having a secure job, people are sure that they will get enough money for their living cost. Nowadays, living cost are increasing and some people have trouble to make enough money to afford that due to lack a job. The mian goal of jobs is providing enough money for the workers and employees, as a result, they can afford their costs like renting and shopping. Moreover, if people face a chance to get a secure job, even though it is not satisfying, they should take it as quickly as possible , I believe. For example, last year my cousin had a chance to get a job which was totally secure and without any risk of getting fired. Because he was jobless and needed money, he took that job despite the fact that the job was not quit satisfying. However, now he earn a lot of money which fulfils it needs, and alos he is satisfied by making enough money.
Secondly, poeple will have more opportunity to get successful in their job when they have a secure job. In general, people who have no axiety about their issues have more desire and concentration to work hard in order to achieve their goals. Therefore, when people are not concerned about lossing their job, not only do they work harder, but also they will be more successful in their job. As a result of this hard working, they can improve their abilities and skills in their career,and exclusive managers will promote them to higher level after a while. I do argue that the security of a job is the most factor in any job, although the job seems unfatisfying.
All in all, I belive that having a more secure job is totally important and people should take the job which is secure, despite of its satisfying. The main reasons are that fact then not only do people earn enough money, but also they will get successful in their careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, in general, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51688311688 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35480257566 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47012987013 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2750937311 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415890690759 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169317587445 0.076458572812 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11053578709 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287755567148 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127656724404 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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