Do you agree or disagree? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of human, human beings have been involved in various wars, conflicts or periods of economic depression. The results of these and many more make, what we call now, history. Some people believe that it is a waste of time for university students to take history courses, because they most probably will not need it in their future career. I subscribe to the supposition that it is of great necessity for university students to take history courses, regardless of their field, for two important reasons.
First, these courses help students to shoot up their GPA. History courses are usually based on memory and do not require any background knowledge. As a result, getting a good mark in a history exam is easy. Since at the end of the semester it does not matter whether it is a scientific course or a history course; if you get a good grade in any of your courses, it is going to have a huge positive impact on your final GPA. I remember when I was in the third year of my studies, my university was about to drop me out because of my low grades. I was devastated about this incident, so I reached out to my university advisor. She told me that this year the university is offering a history course. According to my advisor, many students had gotten great grades in that course throughout the past years. Hence, she recommended me to take the course, and so I did. Even though I did not have a lot of time to prepare for the history exam, I got a good mark, simply because my memory is good and I could recall whatever I had studied the night before. As is clear, the history course saved me from being dismissed from the university.
Second, history course is able to teach students valuable life lessons. A history is the record of what had happened in the past; the fate of a tribe; probably because they had faced years of drought and hunger, the victory of a nation in a civil war; because they could manage to have allies from around the world, or the destruction of a society; because their leader was not able to do a good job at leading his people. As my history teacher puts it, "many regrets lie in the graveyards and only those who study history can avoid making the same mistakes". Only through the experience of other people, can we achieve our goals without having to face horrible consequences. It may be true that the students who do not study history at university are able to focus more on their field, but later in their lives, they will face difficult situations that their scientific knowledge cannot help them. Consequently, students must study history to ensure that they will not be considered as future victims, just like those that we read in history books.
In sum, with all this taken into account, I believe that every university student must have history course in their curriculum on the grounds that they will be able to easily get better GPA and they will not make their ancestors’ mistakes again. Who can ignore the merits of historical knowledge and only focus on their field?
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- Do you agree or disagree? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, so, third, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2502.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59926470588 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53000751791 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483455882353 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5521779516 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.782608696 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.652173913 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268694562087 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806076481548 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512954003066 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170598543023 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116284670513 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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