do you agree or disagree?playing sport teaches people more lessons of life.
Nobody could overlook this fact that sport plays a crucial role in humans' life whether physical or mentality aspects. Some believe that playing sports instructs people more lessons about life, so in my vantage point, such a great perspective toward sport strongly is true. The following paragraphs will vastly elucidate my view through three noticeable reasons:
To begin with, every activity which is done by people, usually pursue a purpose. Studying for gaining literacy, working for earning money, eating for surviving and doing exercise for obtaining health and list goes on. So with having this in mind, one should realize that one of the main goals of playing sport is that the soul of humans is inclined to championship. When people set a purpose such as championship in the wrestle competence, they make efforts to achieve it, as a matter fact wrestlers will not give up as long as they succeed. This feature in a sport man is able to affect his personal life; therefore, this person will be highly motivated in all dimensions of life.
The second reasons for my argument lies in the reality that sports especially those which are involved in a team require collaboration and cooperation. In a soccer play, a soccer team can be winner only when all members of team participate in regular route. Needless to say an egotistical behavior will have destructive consequences. Furthermore, sport men learn to compete without harming each other. All of these positive characters as collaboration or healthy competition can be traced in private life.
Moreover, I tend to empower my claim with following discussion. Playing sport improve interpersonal skills among the young in a spread spectrum. It can be said that people have an opportunity during sport to meet persons who share common interests with them; consequently, the new and valuable friendships will be evolved. In fact, the youths with social problems can apply sport for treating their trouble.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that advantages of playing sport in our life will be salient because all needed factors in sport field such as cooperation or making new friends, can be employed by humans to optimize the quality of their real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, in fact, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08719346049 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72912734705 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615803814714 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2103739028 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225859058761 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699122960163 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687045914666 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134925405154 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624043450305 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.