Generally speaking, I disagree with that statement that people do very few things well beacuse they are busy doing so many various things.
First, doing different kinds of things can develop positive attitude easier than just doing one thing all along. I can recall when I prepared the university admission examination, all I had to do are just to study hard and try to get a higher point. I felt a little bit deprssion at that time, because everything in my life seems just dull and tough. Once I got a bad score, I totally broke without exaggeration. My father forced me to stop studying that night and pick up my brushes and painting board again. By painting, I slowed my pace, took a breath and relaxes myself. The stuff different from study helped divert my attention and keep me optimisitic agian.
Second, doing different things can broaden people's horizon, because they can handle problems from different standpoints. One of eminent Renassiance artists, Da Vinci, was actually a sculptor, painter and sculptor. He make his reputation due to his achievement in different areas. What's more, his experience in painting really help a lot, so he could get the right proportion of human body when he made sculpture of a human body.
Third, although individual's attention may objectively be scattered when dealing with several stuff, doing different things at the same time actually can help people improve their efficiency, because they are used to make their timetable flexible and practical. A survey conducted by experts from Oxford University shows that over 90% of the enterprisers can make good schedule and handle different things effectively and efficiently. These kinds of ability are cultivated by their dealing with their routing jobs always involving all kinds of various things.
By considering the several benefits stated above, individuals who are busy doing many a different thing, can finish their work as well as those who focus on one single stuff. In some degree, they can do even better.
- An effective leader tries to make others feel they are part of the decision-making process? 75
- Tpo 2- Q2- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree? 70
- Do you agree or not?Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well. 86
- Do you agree or not?Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well. 88
- TPO 36 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For the successful development of a country it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children five to ten years old than to spend money on universities 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...and try to get a higher point. I felt a little bit deprssion at that time, because everyth...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ention and keep me optimisitic agian. Second, doing different things can broad...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ly a sculptor, painter and sculptor. He make his reputation due to his achievement i...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... to his achievement in different areas. Whats more, his experience in painting really...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some stuff'.
Suggestion: some stuff
...ectively be scattered when dealing with several stuff, doing different things at the same tim...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing different things at the same time actually can help people improve their e...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to making'.
Suggestion: used to making
...rove their efficiency, because they are used to make their timetable flexible and practical....
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...involving all kinds of various things. By considering the several benefits stat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, really, second, so, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67496274665 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.808337227 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336854812496 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105535288338 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151934910559 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246725093614 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187501321771 0.0645574589148 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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