Do you agree that people should always participate in the activities that they are good at or talented in?
Self-actualization is one of the controversial issues nowadays because competition plays a crucial role in the modern era. People strive to flourish their talents in the competitive world and try to be perfect in aspects of life, such as education and career. Two main ideas are entirely opposite; Some people believe that versatility is the essential factor for being a winner, and people have to be adapted to various situations, not only the fields which are related to them. On the contrary, some others are of the opinion that people must discover their own talent and move forward in one area which is the most convenient for them. I support the idea that creating talent is the most crucial solution and vindicate my viewpoint for two reasons.
The first crucial reason that must be considered is that people inherit most of the abilities and intelligence from their biological parents, and genetics is inevitable in determining the future. In a research conducted by Tehran University, nearly 80 percent of the students that studied in engineering fields had at least one member of their family who majored in engineering or mathematical science. The environmental factors, however, can exacerbate or increase the genetics and cannot take its place, unless with much of endeavor that ordinary people in the society hardly have this factor. So flourishing your talents and being distinguished as a top candidate in job interviews requires talents and endeavor is a secondary factor in such an issue.
The other noteworthy reason that should not be underestimated is that, usually, making endeavor in fields that are not inclined to one’s talents makes depression and anxiety. Most of the University students who have depression and disorders are those who have not chosen their major according to their talents, and usually, they can not meet the expectations that society or parents require. Students in high school should be careful about their own future and not get deceived by the majors that are more popular in the community. Because they have to try hard, and a perfect job is not guaranteed for them. So because of their self-confidence, they should choose the best major according to their talents.
To recapitulate the whole discussion, talent plays an essential role in life and career Due to the fact that genetics is dominant in comparison to environmental factors and the essentiality of self-confidence and equilibrium in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, at least, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96011089632 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50626566416 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2178416728 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131747568312 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047804358686 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229778262737 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753849991666 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271636260387 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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