Do you agree with the statement that Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking website.
It is no secret that, our modern era is characterized by all monumental changes that technology have made in our life. Somehow, it has made it easier for being educated person.By saying technologies, I mean cell phones, the internet, and social networks. However, these technologies cause a heated debate among academicians which is whether these gadgets help students’ education, or they are deleterious to their learning. A plethora of people possess the contention that these technologies render teaching to the students of this generation arduous. Others, on the other side, assert that not only do these technologies not make teaching harder but also they help teachers to teach the students in more efficient ways. I am of the opinion that both of the mentioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
One of the primary reasons striking my mind is that these new technologies will lead the students to be more curious to learn since they could easily surf the internet for the subjects that their teacher taught them in the class. Furthermore, there is a myriad of knowledge which circulates through the social networks and a student who is in such networks exposed to this considerable knowledge. In some cases reading this matter will arouse students’ curiosity to learn. To illustrate this point, I can mention my sister experience with these gadgets and their impacts on her tendency to learn. She has a facebook account which brings her this possibility to know what is happening around her. Last week someone posted a subject about a new discovery about gravity which says the gravity is actually a wave. By reading this subject, she was more motivated to study and learn her lesson so as to understand what is happening around her. As a result, I think this fact make the teaching straightforward, in contrast to the time when I was young, as this generation are much more motivated to learn because of their exposure to knowledge.
Another equally important reason is that working with these gadgets will reduce the students’ concentration span, although the facilities like cell phones and social networks will increase the student’s susceptibility to knowledge and therefore enhance their desire for learning. They may have some disadvantages; as a matter of fact when they are listening to their teacher or studying at the home a notification from a social network, or a message can break their concentration. In this regard, an empirical study in the psychology department of the University of Tehran indicates that nowadays approximately 78% of student are suffering from a lack of concentration in contrast with the last generation. Which I think is depicting the demerits of these gadgets. Also, we can realize, from this fact, that the processes of teaching take more time these days.
To sum up, taking all the aforementioned into account, it can be concluded that in some cases, it will be fruitful to use this technology to make learning for children easier, but it also has some deleterious effects on the process of learning. All in all, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out more information about this issue.
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...motivated to study and learn her lesson so as to understand what is happening around her...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'i mean', 'i think', 'in contrast', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'in contrast to', 'in some cases', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222780569514 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.170854271357 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0603015075377 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335008375209 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0653266331658 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118927973199 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0435510887772 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00054292852 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035175879397 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00335008375209 0.00188951952338 177% => OK
Determiners: 0.12730318258 0.0887237588012 143% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201005025126 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167504187605 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3271.0 2387.08602151 137% => OK
No of words: 534.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12546816479 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365168539326 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288389513109 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215355805243 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144194756554 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00054292852 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503745318352 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.6100626905 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4285714286 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2471082852 48.84282405 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.761904762 120.699889404 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 54.2675227394 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.42857142857 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283828259937 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1213479651 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0605553879193 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494648001572 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129768311252 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109161566202 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518418820614 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364671400186 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.099633674703 0.067059652881 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204021014302 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368590601746 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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