Do you believe in luck, hard working or talent?
Honorable attendantce. Dear teachers, beloved brothers, and sisters.Life always extends to cover different fields, as well as human interests and believes. People's believes usually vary from person to person; there are those who believe in luck, hard working and talent, but personally speaking I strongly believe in hard-working.
Hard-working is one of the most necessary things on which you should focus. No one reaches his or her goals without making any effort because life is about giving and taking. Consequently, when you give something, you will have something in return. Those who believe in luck built their belief on accidental things happened for them, also there those who think that possessing some tools brings good luck like having rabbit leg or some kind of rings. However, I strongly believe that there is no such thing called "luck", but I am totally convinced by the fact of the existence of a common thing between luck and hard-working which states that luck believers always do their best to gain whatever they set out to gain, especially, if that is going to bring them good luck. Therefore, we conclude that luck is basically connected to hard-working. Talented people; on the other hand, are those people who have special skills. Talent is the skill or the ability of doing something well and in order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. Furthermore, talent can be gained by hard-working as well.
Hard-working is the number one choice for successful people who aim to make their goals, dreams and whatever they want, to come into reality. There are a lot of people who have talents. A Smart person realize the potential of his talents, but the smartest one realize the potential of combining his talents with hard-working.To sum up, it is good to know your talents, but it's better to know how to improve them. Hard working is the best way to upgrade talents and skills.
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Suggestion: Life
...teachers, beloved brothers, and sisters.Life always extends to cover different field...
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Suggestion: To
...combining his talents with hard-working.To sum up, it is good to know your talents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96894409938 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73088574826 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1695872766 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488902076635 0.236089414692 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147353925867 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12320171876 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310732842839 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12760290527 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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