Do you believe in luck, hard working or talent?
Life always extends to cover different fields, as well as human interests and believes. People's believes usually vary from person to person; there are those who believe in luck, hard working and talent, but personally speaking I figuratively believe in hard-working.
Hard-working is one of the most necessary things on which you should focus. No one reaches his or her goals without making any effort because life is about giving and taking. Consequently, when you give something, you will have something in return.
Honestly, Those who believe in luck, they built their belief on some accidental things happened to them, also there those who think that possessing some tools brings good luck like rabbit leg or some kind of rings. However, I think luck is a just complex mental matter and I strongly believe that there is no such thing called "luck", but I am totally convinced by the fact of the existence of a common thing between luck and hard-working which states that luck believers always do their best to gain whatever they set out to gain, especially, if that is going to bring them a good luck. Therefore, we conclude that luck is theoretically connected to hard-working. Talented people; on the other hand, are those people who have special skills. Talent is the skill or the ability of doing something well and in order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. Furthermore, talent can be gained by hard-working as well.
Hard-working is the number one choice for successful people who aim to make their goals, dreams and whatever they desire come into reality. There are lots of people who have talents and only a Smart person realize the potential of his talents, but the smartest one realize the great potential of the combination of talent and hard-working.
To sum up, it is good to know your talents, but it's better to know how to improve them, so I believe that hard working is the best way to upgrade talents and skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85970149254 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68882160798 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6835938374 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517137633896 0.236089414692 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166855503843 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112307633925 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252232819622 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103561919005 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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