do you say your friends' mistakes even if this action heard to your friendship?
There is no doubt that friendship plays pivotal role in everybody’s lives. No one can deny the direct and indirect effects of friends on our private lives.
It is widespread argument whether it is better to tell our friend’s mistakes even our relationship would be broken or disregarded about their mistakes. I personally believe that the former belief is true due two reason which I will elaborate in following paragraphs.
The first considerable reason is that if you want to be a faithful friend you should tell your friends’ mistakes. One of the most prominent feature of good friends is that they love their friends and more care about them than their friendships. They have valor to say truth to their friend and let them know their mistakes even if it puts their friendships into the danger. Because of Truly friends have great loyalty, they have higher responsibility about you and they could not see you to do wrong. Furthermore, they are more supportive and give hand to their friends and help them to eliminate their mistakes. Because of supportive features, close friends never resent the truth. For instance, I have great friend from university. when we were undergraduate students, my friend fell in love with unreliable and wencher guy in her class and she really loved him but I knew that this guy might be harmed my friend. it was hard situation for me to decided to tell my friend he was not suitable for you or overlooked, finally I decided to tell her whatever I knew about this guy my friend first was upset from me but after a while she realized that I loved her and did this just for her. So, after this, we were closer than before and became crony.
Another noteworthy reason is only fake people did not tell their friends truth. Because they are so jealous of their friends and when see their friends doing somethings wrong, they do not have sympathetic to tell truth and aware them about their mistakes. Since when their friends ask them why not tell me blender they respond “I was worried about our friendships and thought had i told you truth, you might me upset about me” but they entirely lie, because only jealous people can keep you on mistakes. From my own experience, my sister had jealous friend whom leaded my sister into the trouble and then when my sister asked her why did you not tell me I was wrong she said that dread you broke up with me. But after a while, my sister understood she could not be a good friend for her and ended up friendships with her. Once I asked her about her friend, she said “she was fake friend because never aware me about my mistakes and it is the feature of fake people that we get really away from them”.
At the end of the discussion, although, sometimes some friendships maybe broken up at first, when one friends tell truth to other, but it is the feature of good friend to tell their friends their mistakes and even their relationships broken, after a while, their friend realized that made wrong and came back and apologized their friend and be grateful about them to tell truth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
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Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, then, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 117.0 43.0788530466 272% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2555.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67948717949 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50270285536 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419413919414 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5817597825 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216177225687 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768616219508 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048243935079 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12081010456 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613093695849 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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