Do you think that students today are more interested in politics than in the past?
I think students today are more interested in politics than in the past. As a student myself, I feel like student’s awareness towards politic has grow tremendously these past few years. Here’s three reasons why I think that.
First, in our generation, internet makes access to all kinds of information very easy. we can look deeper into the issues that we care or concern about. With these information, we can quickly form our views about certain topic. Not to mention social media, which makes politic infiltrating into our daily lives, help us learn new information.
Second, because nowadays we live in a more democracy country, students are not afraid to speak up or make moves. we can tell that by looking at the growing numbers of political movements that was held by students these past few years. And the number of young generation that participants in political movements is growing too. With these movement spread by social media, it also gave students more chance to sparks interest in politics.
Last but not least, the change of attitude towards politics also makes students more interested in politics. students began to discuss politic with their friends and classmate.
it might be out of interest or wanted to gain global vision to keep up with the world.
Either way, it makes students more aware of what is happening in our country or the world. also, in the past, people are more likely to think politic is not their business. but now, students started to realize how every choices government make might affect them. Therefore makes them care more.
To sum up, the change of attitude and easy access to information contribute to the rise of student interest in politics than in the past.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55646344601 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2342948666 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5789473684 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394036131229 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143245293199 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178895670053 0.0737576698707 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211982047794 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140445636076 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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