In recent times, technology has greatly influenced the major aspects of human life. In education, technology has created lots of faster and easier means of educating students which benefits both the students and the lecturers. Although , some group of people may think that educating children is a more difficult task today than decades ago primarily because of technological devices, I definitely disagree with this notion.
To begin with, the use of technological devices in educating the young makes them more knowledgeable. Needless to say, technological devices such as phones and laptops through which they access online games and social networking might create a negative side to the profitable use of technological devices in educating children, it is definitely a great way of teaching because children will have the opportunity to harness and broaden their horizon. They will find it very easy to access information relating not just to the subject area taught in the classroom but also very important topics that would help their understanding of various topics. To cite a very simple example of this; my ten year old cousin was taught in the school about the different parts of the body, and he came back home and was curious to find more about this information . He grabbed his small laptop and started to surf the internet about the human body. He mentioned a medical term 'hypothalamus' which i had no knowledge of. With such good knowledge in children, the teachers are even more challenged to be on their toes. Hence, technological devices can propel children to learn and acquire knowledge.
in addition, the use of technological devices helps them to be resourceful and more independent. it is plausible that if children can start at can early stage to surf the internet for basic ideas or information, it will greatly benefit them in the long run as they can easily obtain information without even relying on their parents. This obviously sharpens their IQ and the inquisitive nature in them. Therefore, learning with these devices are of immense benefits.
However, despite these tremendous ways by which children can develop and become more knowledgeable, its downside is that without proper caution, they can be misused. These negative effects will lead to distraction, less input in studies and poor performance.
In summary, keeping in mind the great ways by which technological devices can help to improve our kids, I recommend that students should be educated with these devices as its benefits cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, in addition, in summary, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22518159806 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87021231619 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6203970133 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.888888889 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157553067677 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451521386566 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563401943523 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080959916375 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535875162214 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.