As far back as the 1600s, there has been a tremendous improvement in the Car industries. These industries have created various benefits to individuals and the economy as a whole. If some people could imagine that there will be fewer cars in twenty years to come because of its great hazards to the environment, I definitely take the opposite view. The following paragraphs expound on my reasons.
To begin with, it is extremely difficult for most car companies to fizzle out of the market. Car companies such as Tesla, Mercedes, Hyundai, Toyota and many more contribute greatly to the economy. Most of these companies generate substantial revenue to the government which in turn makes them highly indispensable to the government. Furthermore, new technologies in the car industry is at a fast pace with sophisticated models of vehicles being produced every year. These new technologies are developed by skilled mechanical and electrical engineers, software gurus and many other intellectual people. Accordingly, manufacturing of these cars creates a job employment for these individuals which will be inconsiderate to come to a stop as it is a means of survival.
In addition, there is an unreliable means of public transportation. In some third world countries, public bus transportation is a mess. It is mainly a one-man business and it is highly inefficient as people would not depend on it to commute them to their various destinations. This is due to the incompetence’s of the private owners in poor maintenance of vehicles and time management. Consequently, people will definitely prefer to use their private vehicles to commute to their various destinations with ease and less hassle with public transport. Also, in developed countries, considering the inclement weather that occurs in most part of the year, most people will subscribe to stay at the comfort of their vehicles without having to hop from one bus to the other during the cold winter period. In general, it is probably difficult for fewer cars to exist in years to come as many people have various reasons towards having a car.
The last but the least, in some parts of the world, people perceive having a car as a form of luxury and will ultimately keep up with the new trends in cars.
In conclusion, it is incontrovertible to think that with the aforementioned reasons, there will be fewer cars in twenty years to come.
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- Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typic 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of survival. In addition, there is an unreliable means of public transportatio...
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...their various destinations with ease and less hassle with public transport. Also,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07808564232 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13209368468 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1316940308 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.105263158 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174680511275 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543944394738 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608861695579 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122410107399 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580368944006 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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