Every day there are a lot of event that may occur around our life. these either effect or daily life or not. But the question is, if it is important to know about these event or no. This can be weighed in many aspect. Admittedly, some people believe, it is not acrucial thing to know what happened around them. This is because, they do not want to be distracted. In my opinion, I thing, we should be aware about any event which may occur around us. In the following essay, I will elaborates on a couple reason to explain my piont of view in this subject.
First, most important thing come to my mind. knowing events that happened aroud as is helpful. This is due to the fact that by doing so we will be aware about any disaster that occur nearby and may be involved with it. therefore we can take our pecuation to be in the save side. This is a compelling example from our real live, befor threeyears ago, hericane had happened in South Calorano. When we heared. We prepared ourselves from food and drings. In addition to sake for save place to hide in itabout that. As opposit, If we did not pay attention to whal may occur around as, we can not protect ourselves since we didnot know about that problem.
In addition, the other reason which spring to me, I thing, every individule should know what things happened near by. this will braod his horizon. Also, may be let him share in solving any problem if he can. For instance, the war which had happened in Yamen before several years ago. Many people did charity to children in Yamen to save kids live, so if we do not know about any thing around us . We can not donate and share in solve part of problem.
In conclusion, I believe, we should be aware about events that may happen around us.
Every day there are a lot of event that may occur around our life. these either effect or daily life or not. But the question is, if it is important to know about these event or no. This can be weighed in many aspect. Admittedly, some people believe, it is not acrucial thing to know what happened around them. This is because, they do not want to be distracted. In my opinion, I thing, we should be aware about any event which may occur around us. In the following essay, I will elaborates on a couple reason to explain my piont of view in this subject.
First, most important thing come to my mind. knowing events that happened aroud as is helpful. This is due to the fact that by doing so we will be aware about any disaster that occur nearby and may be involved with it. therefore we can take our pecuation to be in the save side. This is a compelling example from our real live, befor threeyears ago, hericane had happened in South Calorano. When we heared. We prepared ourseleves from food and drings. In addition to sake for save place to hide in itabout that. As opposit, If we did not pay attention to whal may occur around as, we can not protect ourselves since we didnot know about that problem.
In addition, the other reason which spring to me, I thing, every individule should know what things happened near by. this will braod his horizon. Also, may be let him share in solving any problem if he can. For instance, the war which had happened in Yamen before several years ago. Many people did charity to children in Yamen to save kids live, so if we do not know about any thing around us . We can not donate and share in solve part of problem.
In conclusion, I believe, we should be aware about events that may happen around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35889570552 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23263791783 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530674846626 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3322325844 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2083333333 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396415151025 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120694070499 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127512088138 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265784860666 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201432573663 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 11.7677419355 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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