Every time my mother wanted to criticize my behavior that she can not tolerate, I always said to her that she must have done soemthing that my grandpa disliked when she was young like me. Surely it is, there are lots of difference between my geration and my parents'. Especially in some important ways in lifestyle. As far as I concerned, the attitudes toward the sex of next generation is the most different one that I experinced.I will address my view as follows.
To begin with, the generation of my parents like boys much more than girls because of the Chinese traditional culture. In that the Chinese once considered men were the only descendends of the family.Even once the young women married to their husbands, they would have no name of their own. Instead, their only names were followed with their husbands like Mrs.Wang or Mrs. Zhang. This traditional concept had influenced generations by generations. Luckily enough, I was a boy and now grows up, or maybe their is another young brother in my family if I was a girl. While some of my friends were not so lucky as they are girls who have little brothers or lots of brothers as their parents wanted to do so.Just because the tradition of Chinese.
Now things are different. Due to the open policy of China, I growed up with modern western advanced cultures like TV shows and movies. I learned a lot from these videos,especially how to be gentle to women as the western, the belief that ladies comes first was taught by English teacher when I was in the primary school. Thus my conception of the equal rights between male and females was formed when I was still young. Just years ago, the Government opened the second child policy as every Chinese parents who have only one child can give birth to another one by this policy. Thus I will be lucky enough to have two childs like the Movies I watched when I was young. More important, this policy means the geovernment emphasize the equality between sexes. And more people would like to have a gilr like me, as the time changed, people changed, because of the progress of human beings never stops.
While the feminism is rising in China, I found that the boys are becoming a little bit ingoing or coward in some ways. THis is another attitude I discovered in this difference. This trend need to be concerned by all of us as it is still changing which not like I saw in the movies when I was young. Boys should be brave and stong in my opinion while the conditon is not what I expected.Maybe the evolution is goning on.
In all, our generation do not dislike the gilrs anymore, this is the most different way from our parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, still, thus, while, as for, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58016877637 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52309120856 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504219409283 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3218490914 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3913043478 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6086956522 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961101167893 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314331195409 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434151215408 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675144154337 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473955175892 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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