Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents' generation?
In today's hectic world in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different ponit of view about generation and lifestyle regarding the trends of modern world. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether in what extend our generation differ from our parent's generation. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that nowadays the lifestyle has changed with progress of technology, which hardly ever our parents experienced them. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that we can easily see the changes generation by generation. Scientifically speaking, each generation has its own benefits and drawback which differ through years. In fact, our parents' generation hardly ever experienced such progress in technology that our generation experience. Delving further into the issue reveal that not only were not our parents provided with this kinds of technology but also they were intrested in traditional lifestyle in which technology was not valuable for them. On the other hand, new generation are more likely to use various advices and not only do use of modern technology patronize our generation to improve but also provide fertile ground for people regardless of their ages to enhance their education and reach to their pinnacle of their life. For example our generation use internet in order to do banking transaction or bookking a ticket and so forth. Indeed, technological advancement make a substantial difference between different generations. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that people in the past were not acquintance not only with the influence of internet but olso other means of technology and did not know how to use them in order to live easier. In fact, they mostly led a traditional lifestyle.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that political power play a significant role in difference of generations. Broadly speaking, our parents' generation grew up under strict situation, in which government legislate blissfuly strict rules. Indeed, they have had least authority to speak in public, otherwise they could have been seriously punished. But our generation differ in variety of ways. To put it in other word, nowadays our generation lives in a society, which not only can people contend their true opinion without fear but also protest against government if they do not meet their needs. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, our parents led a healthier lifestyle compare to our generation. As amatter of fact, they lived in a traditional way without imrovement of modern technology such as phone or voice mail and so forth, which run people into huge problems. In addition, they were provided with nourishing and organic meals that our generation are deprived. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, various items cause significant changes in different generations. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that advancement of new technology is one the most paramount items, which brings many difference among generations. In addition, strict rules enact by government in our parents' generations compare to our generation, which freedom is governed can be the alternative reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'changes'' or 'change's'?
Suggestion: changes'; change's
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...only were not our parents provided with this kinds of technology but also they were ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey mostly led a traditional lifestyle. Another reason that is equally important...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...issfuly strict rules. Indeed, they have had least authority to speak in public, otherwise...
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Line 5, column 852, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eration. As amatter of fact, they lived in a traditional way without imrovement of modern technology...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difference seems to be countable; consider using: 'many differences'.
Suggestion: many differences
... the most paramount items, which brings many difference among generations. In addition, strict ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...governed can be the alternative reason.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243243243243 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.155802861685 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.087440381558 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0794912559618 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0667726550079 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12559618442 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0445151033386 0.0351676179071 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98064134667 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254372019078 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00317965023847 0.00188951952338 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.0588235294118 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00953895071542 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238473767886 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3640.0 2387.08602151 152% => OK
No of words: 573.0 408.028673835 140% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35253054101 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404886561955 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322862129145 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232111692845 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186736474695 0.112833075102 165% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98064134667 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500872600349 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 61.4568116736 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2222222222 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5562682239 48.84282405 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.814814815 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.518518518519 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 53.5084351367 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.36842105263 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299726353937 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.068919193934 0.103427244359 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0580126223009 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.403103944783 0.497263757937 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144374192495 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106310713137 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771305411439 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469126822844 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0858847182006 0.067059652881 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226635351906 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357495214644 0.0618886996521 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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