“Experience is the best teacher” is an old cliche but I agree with that. In life, there are so many lessons that can be learned. Lessons that sometimes make people around us know and sometimes make us know how short life is, and valuable time. In my opinion, life is shorter than to be sad, because of the failure of our love or neglect of others, in my view, we just have to travel and enjoy life.
Life goes on. The humans come and go, and they have effects on our lives, such as our parents, they are helping us to grow up, they teach us not to trust anyone and they become old and die. And this process continues. Sometimes we do not listen to their advice and sometimes we can risk in our decision. But I have to say that life is very much based on luck, like Watermelon, we do not know what is inside it is sweet and red or white and premature.
In addition to all this, life experiences have taught me that everyone's life is relevant themselves and should not blame and judge others someone else. we had to walk with other people shoes to find out what they were facing to. Although some people think that best way to learn about life is by listening to our elders and friends, I believe that people learn the best by their experiences.
In general, this experience doesn't necessarily have to be undergone personally, but can be learnt through others as well. Most of all, learning by our own experiences help people to become more mature and ready to tackle difficulties of life.
Overall, although I believe that we learn many things from our family and friends such as social skills, trust and love, I think that learning from our own experiences are long lasting. Also these stuffs, help us to learn more to betterments prepared for the future.
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...to betterments prepared for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, in addition, in general, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51702786378 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42797107975 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2989500387 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147799274572 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493960133951 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910104250418 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855724739705 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530811935331 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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