The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
In my opinion, the extended family is not so important as was in the past. I think some basically changes have important roles. Some critical changes like internet penetration and increasing of financial level between modern families.
The first and the most exquisite reason is that, the role of the internet. Today the internet is one of the nonseparable aspects. In the past, families need someone like an aunt or grandpa for guiding and learning to children or parents use of their experience for improving their lifestyle but today, the internet can solve any questions and create a perfect situation for the learning of kids and consequently, extended families disappear.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that, the financial level of families. Governments in some countries give good funds for families to afford and growing up their children. Some financial help like this make fades the role of others and change families smaller than past. for example, when I was a little girl, we lived with my grandparents. We wanted to rent a new home because we struggled with financial problems. In that bad situation, they help us financially. But in the new-age, this does not happen easily and my brother rents a home with funds from the bank without any help from others.
From what has been discussed above, I believe the financial level of people and the role of the internet are two critical points for change families from extended families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01632653061 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63085209717 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.8805350461 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158595490072 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581471444908 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917353564635 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104712459773 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467136831473 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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