The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
In today's modern world, the bare thought about the conjunction of the family is the fundamental reason of being family apart. Extended Family, a very ancient architecture of human bond, based on its importance against time is divided into two categories. Some people prefer its importance over the time period is remain same, while others believe otherwise--that is getting less importance than a prior period.I, for one, subscribe to the former group for a quite few reasons, two conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon under.
To begin with, passing the moment away, pen seems to reach the stationary point, the nature loneliness repeatedly getting prosperous with failure not to make us feel lonely because of an incontrovertibly axiomatic strength of the extended family.
Since the beginning of the era, homogeneous people love to live with a society. They felt that life would be full of danger, nature would not be the only ravenous towards us, the kindhearted soil could be aggressively violent than the last unless we take the first step to become domestic. Becoming into a sociable creature family in other words extended family was our ancient culture. It makes us realize that we are not alone from the infant stage to the older most.
Additionally, playing a vital role happiness is becoming an indispensable part of our life. According to the great Scientist Aristotle, It's the reason we are living on. Happening the most astounding events of us, thought that comes to our mind first is to share my happiness with my dearest one. Because, by sharing this, get some appreciation which found us to feel with pride by others. In that type of scenario, the family is the one which comes first to us. So it is the family, which always does its job beneath our sight.
All in all, the extended family is an invaluable experience for everybody because of it, we feel to live alive. So there is no chance to become less important in this modern age.
- TPO:24 75
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in availability of information influence life in today's world? 81
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19365079365 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0589858856 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.1344086022 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.035941582 48.9658058833 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.2 100.406767564 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 20.6045352989 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141820654246 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821584452942 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527818003323 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798096460539 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441694703904 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 11.7677419355 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 58.1214874552 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.0537634409 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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