The extended family (grandparents,cousins,aunts and uncles) is less important now than it was in past

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...ortance to the family members. Firstly,In early days childrens talk to each other...
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...n preparing for different types of exams ,as there is a large competition compared...
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...ompetition compared to the earlier time.Now coachings are present in large amount ....
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...ow coachings are present in large amount .So there are about a thousand applicants...
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... are injurious and deleterious to health . Secondly,people don't want a lar...
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...ded families given more importance today ,others say that extended families are no...
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...d families are not so essential nowadays .But in my opinion from above discussion ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24566473988 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96712155909 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604046242775 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.1344086022 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 281.884373458 48.9658058833 576% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 363.0 100.406767564 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.2 20.6045352989 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 5.45110844103 426% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.5376344086 795% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993646262088 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726049586177 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521219925911 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726049586177 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521219925911 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 11.7677419355 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 58.1214874552 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.0537634409 294% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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