Food easier to prepare
Food is one of the primary necessities that we as humans have to obtain. Without food, our mind and body become frail and weak which makes us unable to perform mental and physical tasks like thinking, driving, skating, reading, etc. Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. We should ask ourselves if this development in food technology has benefited us or has it done more bad than good. Recent developments in food namely ‘fast-food’ has decreased preparation time by a very large amount of time. However, this has resulted in ill-effects like obesity, diabetes, cancer and many other diseases that can be harmful to the human body. I personally believe that as food preparation becomes faster we can spare time for intellectual activities like reading, work, research etc.
With the introduction of new technologies like the rice cooker, microwave, toaster, etc. We no longer have to spend time to get food as our ancestors once did. Humans throughout have had their primary livelihood in producing food. From the ancient hunter-gatherers to our farmers we have always spent most of our time in producing food. As food production becomes easier, less people need to be involved in the food production process, in fact we may now need to spend only about a few minutes each day in obtaining food. This shift has allowed us to move from an agricultural economy to a high income knowledge based economy. This shift gives us more time to spend on intellectual pursuits like marketing, research, sciences, etc.
As the speed of production improves we can see ourselves reducing the risk of malnutrition as scarcity decreases. All in all, I believe that improvements like these have many more positive points than negative ones. In conclusion, this is a much welcomed and positive change and it has definitely improved our lives.
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 86
- Food easier to prepare 73
- hometown 60
- smalltown 70
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236311239193 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.164265129683 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0922190201729 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461095100865 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0662824207493 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121037463977 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0518731988473 0.0351676179071 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95211524475 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0345821325648 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0634005763689 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014409221902 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00864553314121 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1866.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 304.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13815789474 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338815789474 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273026315789 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217105263158 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134868421053 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95211524475 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 65.1831213386 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8823529412 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6156784972 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.644075263715 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 45.1849845201 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.47916666667 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317551084132 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0767742325519 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.053789029904 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.429888024688 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0856171564026 0.151897553556 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124567767039 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149471014895 0.0781384742642 191% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307084282686 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11665041032 0.067059652881 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202023555167 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142867640507 0.0618886996521 231% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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