A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
A foreign visitor with a day to spend in my country should absolutely spend that time in Istanbul. By visiting Istanbul one can see lots of various things of my country at the same time. Foreign visitor can learn about the history of the country, can buy high quality products of Turkey and learn about the customs of Turkish people.
To begin with, Istanbul has lots of historical places that a person can learn about the history of Turkey such as how it was established and how it developed over time. I can recall that I took my foreign friend to a historical house in Istanbul. That house illustrates the lives of previous Turkish people, because it consist of lots of paintings and drawings which shows how people lived before.
Furthermore, a foreign visitor should also spend his time purchasing some traditional materials. The foreign visitor can buy Turkish products in Istanbul at Kapalicarsi, which is one of the most visited places that tourists go and buy local cloths, foods and some special carpets. These products are not expensive, so the foreign visitor does not have to spend too much money on shopping.
By spending time in Istanbul, a foreign visitor can also gain knowledge about the customs of Turkish people. That visitor may have a cup of turkish coffe accompanied by a piece of lokum, which is a kind of sweet. That visitor can also go to a turkish music concert to see what kind of music Turkish people likes. At a local restaurant, the visitor can eat kebap which is made from meat with special taste. They are all the examples of customs of Turkish people that a foreign visitor can experience.
In conclusion, Istanbul is the most appropriate place to have a nice time, if a foreign visitor has only one time to spend in my country. Visiting this incredible city, one can gain knowledge about the history of the country, can also purchase good products and understand the customs of Turkish people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78273809524 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53567062057 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431547619048 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4111766988 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206221161428 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912383167712 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686549732308 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13965118833 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670482155226 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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