India is a great country with lots of tourist attractions and so selecting a place to visit for just a single day is an onerous task. However, if a visitor has only one day to visit my country, I would suggest visiting New Delhi, the capital city of India. India is a country with great historical background and monuments and also a country with a very wide range of cuisines. And Delhi has a plethora of things for tourists to do.
New Delhi was the capital city of many dynasties and empires and so have numerous famous monuments like Red Fort and Qutub Minar. These architects gives a glimpse of the greatness of India even in the medieval periods. Also, she can visit Taj Mahal, which is near to New Delhi, and get a first-hand experience of one of the seven wonders of the world. So by visiting New Delhi one can understand the culture of India and also learn more about the history of my country.
Furthermore, India is a land of very rich and varied heritage. People from all parts of India come and settle down in New Delhi either for work or study or business. These people bring their culture also along with them. So in New Delhi one can experience a variety of cuisines from all over India. Also, New Delhi is famous for its shopping streets, especially the famous Chandni Chowk, where one can shop for very traditional Indian dresses to modern dresses and a variety of things. When I was young, I got a chance to visit New Delhi. Coming from a small city, I was really spell bound by the vastness of the city and I really enjoyed visiting all these places and tasting the different cuisines for the first time in my life.
In conclusion, a single day is never enough in visiting any country. However, visiting the capital city will give the visitor a lot of information about the culture and history of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51681957187 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39369373158 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501529051988 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.878240576 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0555555556 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752524842193 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272419139404 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464339003446 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595108844513 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381238974576 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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