In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
When it comes toe the issue the main causes that helps people to live longer, surely; people can mention various reason for it. According my experience and observation, modern people can live longer because they have more knowledge, access to modern equipment, and receive effective treatments.
First and the most important reason is that modern people have more knowledge about illnesses. It is known that disease was the main cause of mortality, so that most people died because of them even though they were young. At that time people do not have sufficient knowledge about illnesses and cause of them. In most cases, people had strict traditional beliefs and think that disease is wrath of god. However, the scenario is different in the modern age. Modern people have more information about their body and environment, which helps them to have a health life style.
A further point we must consider, nowadays; people have access plenty of fresh and healthy foods. In the past, have not access enough food, because of drought, false methods of agriculture and storing foods. Nowadays, modern and new methods of agriculture allow farmer to produce more foods in a short time. For instance, modern farmers are familiar with new methods of irrigation, which assists them to the use littlie water for great farm lands. In addition, we are able to maintain foods for long time by the use of refrigerator, which decrease deterioration process. Since we now have access variety of fruits and foodstuffs, we are able to live longer.
Apart from point I made above, medical science progresses is another reason of longevity. Modern doctors have more knowledge about illnesses and how to cure them. In addition, modern medical equipment allows them to have better accurate Diagnoses, which are improve their treatment. I think that a small example can give some light on this issue. X-rays lets doctors to see into patients’ body without any injury, which is very necessarily to diagnose. Hence, the patient can get timely and effective treatment and recover in couple of months or even weeks.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that people are live longer, because of high knowledge, fresh and sufficient foods, and high quality of thereby. Last but not least, I hope that people gain the deeper understanding that having access foods, it would not means they should eat too much.
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- TOEFL T P O 20 Integrated Writing Task 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'accessed'.
Suggestion: accessed
...nd healthy foods. In the past, have not access enough food, because of drought, false ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ve better accurate Diagnoses, which are improve their treatment. I think that a small e...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
... that having access foods, it would not means they should eat too much.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266666666667 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.126666666667 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.133333333333 0.0866891130778 154% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355555555556 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0511111111111 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122222222222 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.00888888888889 0.0351676179071 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51616278253 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244444444444 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488888888889 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155555555556 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177777777778 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2409.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 395.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09873417722 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389873417722 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240506329114 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144303797468 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116455696203 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51616278253 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.264380695 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9545454545 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4075999609 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.0051783659 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.86458333333 1.45489161554 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290154536109 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119642020266 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885015354445 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497483032558 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121913020013 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105460755095 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445872060855 0.0781384742642 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24350521976 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796598685794 0.067059652881 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182929620378 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364992519103 0.0618886996521 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.