In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Never have the people had the opportunity to enjoy a longer life than these days. In many countries, the life expectancy is about 84 years old for women’s and 80 for men’s. Although, many reasons contributes to this achievement, in my view the principal and foremost factors are the change in diet, in exercise habits and the advances of medicine.
Firstly, Change in our diet. Nowadays, there is a consensus about the importance of having a healthy diet. Moreover, the consumption of harm substances such as sugar or fat have been reduce, mostly as a result of public policies adopted by gove...
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Comments
The e-grader can't figure out
The e-grader can't figure out the reasons and the topic 'people are living longer now.', so it says maybe it is off the topic. But actually it is not off the topic. The score is around 21 out of 30.
flaws:
1. need more content.
2. still you have grammatical issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...bstances such as sugar or fat have been reduce, mostly as a result of public policies ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'concluded'.
Suggestion: concluded
...ese days than in the past. Science have conclude than the more exercise we do, the more ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13758389262 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85074767526 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9467407831 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0555555556 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0517252060851 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158898544047 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251553775239 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.030218373837 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238258178016 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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