In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Considering the main cause of phenomenon that people are living longer nowadays, I strongly inclined to take the side of medical care improvement, food enhancement and high security as main factors of this subject. Being one of the most proliferated topics in the anthropology science, the duration of people life which can be defined as the degree of possible age highly attracts academic's attention. Needless to say, the effective parameters that immensely affect this topic are considered as the significant variables. To elaborate more on topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the improvement of the medical care as well as the technology development associated with people health such implant devices, monitoring systems, analysis method and production of the impressive drugs can enormously increase the normal age of people.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the quality of the people food. It is crystal clear that there is a causal relationship between the accessibility to healthy and sufficient foods on the one hand and the living duration of humans on the other hand. Some natural disasters such as drought, flood, etc which can bring about the numerous famine are good examples of critical influence of food on the living of people. For instance, in Africa, there are remarkable areas which their people intensively encounter with the food deficiency.
Aside from the the point I made above, the security categorically plays a complementary role in people living. As the historical excavated findings reveal, the unwanted war among different groups of people as well as the numerous attack of some violent groups to other people lead can be indicated as the main factor in significant reduction of people life. It goes without saying, the society development which brings about noticeable enhancement in the security can be recognized as one of the main parameters in the statement that "people are living longer now".
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I absolutely put emphasis on the dramatic factors including the improvement of the medical care, the quality of people food and the security when it comes to the duration of people life. Although, to my best knowledge, there are some factors such as psychological concerns and environmental pollution which can lead to shorter live of people compared with past, the government role in modification of these concerns is undeniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35877862595 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95394751637 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516539440204 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6726463363 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176040872678 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626846983949 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438034406462 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952490783332 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377171514156 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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