In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay
There are some moot points about human's lifetime in our era. The question of whether people are living longer now has aroused as a subject of controversy among individuals. Whet it comes to my position, with considering various aspects, I strongly subscribe to the point that human's lifetime increases significantly in this era. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be expounded in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that nowadays due to huge advancement in technology and science, many diseases which were mortal in past time, cure easily. Therefore, people's lifetime does not threaten by sickness. As a case to the point, I vividly remember, when I was a primary student, we had a neighbor who dies because of a heart attack but, today owing to new medicine when someone, encounter with a heart attack, the rate of dying decreases dramatically. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that technologies and science ameliorate the life cycle.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that nowadays due to propagation in the social media and the internet, the knowledge of people boost in many aspects. Thus, they know what they should eat and what they should eliminate from their diet. As a result, this information helps them to be healthy more than past time. My personal example demonstrates this reality, two days ago, my mother said that when she was younger, she cooked every meal very oily but, today's social media repeatedly asserts that oily foods are very harmful to humans body and parents must eliminate these materials from their children's diets. My personal example sheds some light to the point that the knowledge of people broadens in our epoch and help with a human being health more than the previous time.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reason, I reiterate that, the lifetime of mankind increases with the galloping pace today. Because not only science improves very much, but also the awareness of people fortifies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...oints about humans lifetime in our era. The question of whether people are living longer now has arouse...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... I strongly subscribe to the point that humans lifetime increases significantly in thi...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...nce, many diseases which were mortal in past time, cure easily. Therefore, peoples lifeti...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...tion helps them to be healthy more than past time. My personal example demonstrates this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70162068493 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1636355309 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10109544464 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367160804975 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441430799351 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612254352755 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187822560414 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.