In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
By and large, a lot of factors have impact on people's average life expectancy. Those factors have played paramount role in people's ways of living. Not only do they relieve our lives, but also they afford us with abilities to cope with some problems relating to our longevity. A long-lasting and controversial question which has invariably caused drastic contention in this era is which factors have a significant effect on the increasing people's life expectency. I will aptly elaborate on my prespective using three substantial and compelling reasins.
No one can deny the significant influence of the healthy diet on people's physical condition and mental tranquility. Nowadays, individuals are more aware of the harmful chemical ingredients like fat, sugar, and salt which are readily become avilable and accessible for all of us. Although these deleterious ingredients make our meals strikingly delicious, they have cause serious and irreversibale physical as well as mental problems in the long-run situation. Furthemore, in these times, people strongly value their physical health, and they want to live in prosperious and healy circumstances which broaden their knowledge to compare food in order to select the healthier one. On the other hand, in the past, people suffer from lack of adequate awarness about healthy diet, and those harmdul ingredient were widely used which increased the rate of mortality.
Another indisputable cause that convinces me to hold this idea is that in current days, the vast range of medicine production are helped people to overcome their illnesses which were incurable in the past. Recently, A survey has accomplished in order to investigate the influence of the medicical cure on its decimation of some diseas. This reaserch shows that in the past people were substantially died by simple diseas, however they are cured in this days only by eating limited number of medical drugs. I admitt that medical cure have harmful side-effet on our body, however from general prespective, it is totally worth it.
Finally, my last point regarding this issue which legitimizes my standpoint is that in current days people's body are more resistive against the harmful condition than that of past. At the first look, this reason may be seem weired, but the evolutionary process of the human being's nature brings up an adaptive trend for our body to enhance its resistance against some illnesses. For instance, it is a well-known fact that, the resistivity of people's lungs who have smoked cigerates for a long time, is considerably increased to tolerate much consistency of carbon dioxide gas which is cospicuiosly available in all the mega-cities; however in the past, individuals faced healthy problems only by breathing fire smoke.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons, and examples into account, I conclude that the three factors have pivotal role in increasing our longevity which are eating healthy foods, developing medical cures, and enhancing our resistivity aginst adverse sanitation condition. I highly recommend that the reported reasons be taken as additional information to be considered by students whose major is related to this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... a significant effect on the increasing peoples life expectency. I will aptly elaborate...
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Line 9, column 449, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...imple diseas, however they are cured in this days only by eating limited number of m...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...t the evolutionary process of the human beings nature brings up an adaptive trend for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, as well as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37375745527 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88423761209 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572564612326 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0692578862 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.263157895 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4736842105 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134462110352 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423498282544 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266202490859 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744589374076 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150332730828 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 86.8835125448 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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