A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Any kind of gift play a huge role in infant's development in variety of aspects and also can be a fundamental sign for kid's interests which can lead to choices in his career or profession. Although, there are many gifts I would give the most important for kid's paramount development is a pet. I will elaborate on this by giving some explanations in the following paragraphs.
First, to support my answer i consider that any kind of pet such as dog or cat can have cheerful and positive effect on a child. This is essential for creating emotions of love and respect, which can be attain only by having a sweet little puppy with wagging tail at home. No one can deny that even adults are fulfill with joy when they see their pet, especially after a harrowing working day. However, kids are reacting with stronger emotion and delight which contribute for their emotional development. Also they will learn to express love and respect in most effusive way toward other people.
Furthermore, kids are learning to respect animals early age which may lead to their interest in biodiversity, nature, wildlife an so on. Therefore, a pet as a present in early age can unlock this odds in children. For instance, my cousin bought a baby dog to his little kid as a present for his 9th birthday and this had a significant effect on his kid's development. It is because he adores animals from early age. As a result of this gift currently his son works for a huge company that preserve rare species.
Lastly, having an animal as a present can build up trust in children. As we all know that dog is person's best friend is sufficient reason to buy it for your kid. Animal's devotion and loyalty to it's owner is invariable.
In a nutshell, advantages of choosing a pet as a gift for kid are more than disadvantages. Things like building trusts, opening the interest or inquisition to animals and the cheerful and positive effect can be taken in account for my decision to like better a pet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60795454545 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67110122731 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.946681242 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164446147696 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540401055476 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472927818786 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976386594311 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525174634261 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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