Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
arts and sports both play essential roles in human life. art is more about the the health of human's sole and sports are related to human's body. Inadvertantly, they are both essential in people's lives. However, if a government have to decide between supporting arts or sports in a country, I believe they should pick sports, mainly because of the following reasons.
first and foremost, supporting athletics will encourage the society to be more involved in sports and at least do more excercise. Excericising is essential in people's lives and its importance overweights the importance of art in their life since their health is dependant on it. To make my point more clear, suppose a person who is not involved in any artistic activity, yet this person is enable to continue his life because art is more about beauty of the sole and can be thought as optional to human life. although, that person will suffer from seroius health problem if he does not exersice enough which will stop him from living normally. So the importance of sport is more serious in people's lives.
Second, doing artistics works such as painting , photographing, etc require a healthy body at first. An artist can not concentrate on his work if he gets sick regarded to his lack of excersice. In contrast, an artist can think better with a healthier body. As a famous Persian proverb says "healthy mind needs a healthy body", more spectacular works can be expected from artists who are healthier.
Additionally, sports events such as Olympic games are thought of national events and are involve a vast vareity of fans. these occurances are that much important in some coutries that some people do not go to work in order to watch these games. Forexample, Football World Cup games in Latin America has much importance that sometimes people got killed among the frays between fans.
All in all, From what I have disscussed above, sports should receive more attention not only because it relates to human health but also because it attracts a wider range of people. although, the imact of doing or even watching artistic works to beauty of human sole should not be neglected.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97540983607 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63346106786 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4950818126 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146153724498 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456062628693 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515012248829 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759966248376 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472636484044 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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